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fragile thoughts soon forgotten

Thursday, October 13, 2005

old man

why do you smile so? gliding across the street in your little go-cart, silver hair glinting, you look like a king. we've all stopped for you. but even when it's time to leave, i keep watching as you roll out of my life and into others'. you lift your cane, wave at a curly-haired woman whose eyes are bright. you even start to whistle, i can tell by the way your mouth puckers up. you look up at the sky like it's yours. the cars are honking now. i better go. is it wrong to want to be old?

4 Comments:

At 7:20 AM, Blogger Keith Dow said...

i think more people should want to be old. old people are cool. stupid culture doesn't think so, but thankfully culture doesn't determine what's true, just what people wish was true.

 
At 7:26 AM, Blogger kanadians in korea said...

i totally agree, keith! :)

 
At 9:31 AM, Blogger .a. said...

this totally made me smile! When you paint it like that, who wouldn't want to be cute and old and holding up traffic =)

love you!
a.

 
At 11:08 PM, Blogger Julie said...

Aaaw...he sounds like a little kid! Gaw, this is precious, " you look up at the sky like it's yours." That bit gives me such a good idea about this guy! I wish more people had confidence like that! Sweet write

 

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