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fragile thoughts soon forgotten

Thursday, November 10, 2005

puddles

i'm the little girl with pink ribbons
lying in a puddle of mud
weeping
torn stockings
johnny's laughing,
pointing

i'm the adult with pink leggings
lying in a puddle of mistakes
i'm weeping
torn spirit
and
no one's even
looking

3 Comments:

At 8:28 AM, Blogger .a. said...

I see you and I'll sit w/ you in the mud... if you want me too -- we've all got our own puddles -- being able to admit it is the strongest part.
Love you very much!
A.

 
At 11:37 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I am proud of you too.
And I like puddles too :)
I know, i know

 
At 5:49 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

emilyyyyyy. i've been reading your poems. i absolutely love them. they're haunting and full of images. they're abrupt and they hit you perfectly. i really really enjoyed them.

 

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